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Old Nov 10, 2017   #1
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Judge these, tell me if they're bad and how do I improve dem...nobody bought these ;(
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Old Nov 10, 2017   #2
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they just seem like u made them in a rush to me

try to add a face details ummm stuff like that standards are high these days
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Old Nov 10, 2017   #3
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Hmm I guess ure right. Very perceptive tho ,cuz both of dem were made in an hour each. I am gunnar get a lot better. Cuz I'm a very nice artist in real life. But not so much digital. And since I learned about dis scanning images stuff. I'm really looking forward to having some great heads
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Old Nov 10, 2017   #4
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yeah man im way better at real life art also it takes a lot of getting used to do do digital art

trust me my heads were worse when i first started
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2nd is great
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Old Nov 15, 2017   #6
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Your art looks very squiggly. It is very hard to see whats going on.
I have a hard time seeing the defining parts of the texture the mouth, the eyes, things like that.
Overall for that second texture, you do not need the snow effect clutter.
It makes for a very messy texture. Try taking some of those effects away and you will find your linework is much better.
The first texture, on the other hand, doesn't look like you put any effort into it.
Looks like you took some random wonky tree background slapped it on your texture, then decided to put some sunglasses on.
If you were to choose one to focus on improving. I would definitely go for the second texture.

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