Well, to be honest, I tried to take this guy's advice (forgot his name, let's just say he's epic at texturing) on the hair, thisi s my first time doing hair and trying to make it have like shading and highlights, I agree that the highlights are too bright, but being honest, this is the best hair I've ever done. It also has a layer underneath and another one to make it match the eyes a little more.
The eyes are just nothing to explain 'cause I simply just did 2 black circles, make them smoother and smudged them up, it's just meant to look somewhat scary or as you said emotionless.
I decided not to make it a mouth because without a mouth it is as emotionless as it can be I'd say.
Once I get more CnC, I will take all the advice and change this head, thank you for the post.