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Deadly Crab

the opener was very stiff, you want to try relaxing more joints, make your moves more fluid,etc.
It's not too bad, but not too good either, although it's good for a beginner.(?)
Also don't just flop around while relaxed, you want to keep a balance with hold and relax.
If you do decide to follow what I'm telling you to do, I reccomend holding your neckand wrists, it just looks better in my opinion

Decap is actually quite nice, with more edititng, you could probably get a boom hit, or 3 dms in one hit.
I don't really like kicks/punches that are uneven, unless there is a follow up, which in this case there isn't
There is much more different dms you could actually get besides a decap, you can get a split, elbow, shoulder wrist, pec, and possible even more
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Originally Posted by RayWill135 View Post
Here Goes Nothing

Deadly Crab

the opener was very stiff, you want to try relaxing more joints, make your moves more fluid,etc.
It's not too bad, but not too good either, although it's good for a beginner.(?)
Also don't just flop around while relaxed, you want to keep a balance with hold and relax.
If you do decide to follow what I'm telling you to do, I reccomend holding your neckand wrists, it just looks better in my opinion

Decap is actually quite nice, with more edititng, you could probably get a boom hit, or 3 dms in one hit.
I don't really like kicks/punches that are uneven, unless there is a follow up, which in this case there isn't
There is much more different dms you could actually get besides a decap, you can get a split, elbow, shoulder wrist, pec, and possible even more


I will practice relax and hold using, try new DMs, and improve my openers.
And fluid and better moves I can only learn this with the time, I think

btw, your tips will help me too
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Myself can see that this is bad
but I liked some parts
Attached Files
#Lyrah - Robotic DB Kick.rpl (108.9 KB, 6 views)
I'll spin till u die.rpl (243.3 KB, 5 views)
IM SO BAD PLS HELP ME.rpl (187.5 KB, 6 views)
Fucking fucking something.rpl (280.1 KB, 6 views)
Last edited by Lyrah; Jan 24, 2016 at 08:10 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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damn those last 2 replays were AWESOME

good speed, flips, and style, etc

make more replays like those pls
Robotic DB Kick

Well, your movements have improved
Still a bit stiff, but you'll get there sooner or later
just keep practicing

The kick/trick was quite nice imo
Try to use more joints in your replays, soon you'll know how to use every joint perfectly

I'll Spin Till You Die

This was actually really good
Seems like your more of a realism person
Your movements in this one was stiff aswell
your launches were on beginner level(Like me at tricking, lol)

The spins and tricks were nice
Again, try to use more joints in your moves
Do your best!

I'm So Bad Help Me

Help has come, don't worry
Run was good, doesn't look as stiff as the previous replays
The launcher had potential for an awesome trick

The flips and stuff were stiff
They still look really nice and clean though
Keep this up, and you'll be gold

Fucking Fucking Something

Opener was once again, very stiff
The joints I recommend relaxing are the shoulders, elbows, and sometimes the pecs
Don't always keep them relaxed though, use them to get momentum at times

At the beginning was good, but it then got worse, and then better, then worse
You want it to be the same, if you're gonna be good, stay good, if you're gonna be stiff, stay stiff, try to keep your style throughout the replay

gj overall
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I tried to use the tips that you gave me
My opener is still bad and my moves are still stiff but I think I progressed
Attached Files
Lyrah - Ninja Test.rpl (408.3 KB, 9 views)
ninja_warrior_parkour1.tbm (21.2 KB, 6 views)
Last edited by Lyrah; Jan 25, 2016 at 02:17 AM.
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Ninja Test

Run in the opener is great, much better than what I can do
there was a twitch between the jump
the spin was nice, but try to get more of a twist
takes you a long time to get down and to start moving again
rest of the parts look a bit weird imo, but nice still

gj
Last edited by RayWill135; Jan 25, 2016 at 02:20 AM.
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after ninja test
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Trick, spar
idk
Radomic moves cuz Im bored

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Attached Files
Im a ninja LOOK TO ME.rpl (383.7 KB, 7 views)
Sparring with Nobody.rpl (351.7 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by millie; Jan 25, 2016 at 09:03 AM.
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