Hopefully this will be my first successful try at doing this

opener was un-original wasn't very fluid work on balance and also try staying on your feet more 5/10

oh, didnt know it was a used opener i usually just random click but thanks for CnC

np now this one cough cough you should try to build up more speed next time doesn't look like you spent much time on it looks rushed u should start further away from uke to some twists try to build up spead then get uke with a good kick or punch