Toribash
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Original - Such Replays
So replay, very madman, much hello.

Welcome to my replay thread, where I will make Madmans, parkour, spars, and more.

This is my first madman, i have made other dm replays in the past and decided to try this out. Please cnc and help me get better.
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[Ori] My First.rpl (189.8 KB, 10 views)
Cnc?
The starter should be a bit longer but it wasnt that bad.
The first kick could have done some more damage. Some ppl dont like when you grab before a dm but it doesnt really matter.
The following dms were ok.
The las kick could have got more dms as well.
Nice spipng at the end,
over all its good, keep it up
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My First: This isn't a madman, madmans have 5 dms

opener was a bit weird to be honest, don't like 100 ed replays

u contracted uke's neck to get the decap

second kick can get more dms, so could last kick
invite me to your clan ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
made a new one, more fluidity in this and just a head kick since thats all i felt like for this. I would like some help with openers and using -9.8 grav tho. Thanks for the cnc too.
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[Ori] Grated cheese.rpl (106.3 KB, 8 views)
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Grated cheese:
that opener was too relaxed,and was looking a bit strange.
try to hold you neck,don't let it relaxed,its shaking.
the "jump" was stiff,but you got a high jump.
the movement with the hand to make you body go in uke direction was nice looking.
the kick was too simple :/ wold look better if had extend knee before hitting the head,and hitting with speed.
pose was stiff and you have falled.
retired replaymaker | discord: victortb#9592
thannks for the cnc, i wouldn't say i "failed" but i didn't feel like posing its more of what happens in the replay. here are some parkours.
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le try hard:
now you got better than before.
the opener keeps much simple,try a long distance and more movements before the ukebashing(have style).
punch was just great.
but you kicked using the knee to the arm.
the ghost dm that happened in the chest was good.
but the movements:
during the final skeet you was a bit stiff,and looked weird when you launched the hand.
sometimes you are much relaxed.
final pose is missing.

slow and steady:
yet again,try to do some stuff before hits.
and uke is glitched,after the first kick it "pumps" to another location,but ok.
the punch was possible to do a boom punch.
and was possible to do alot of more stuff.
retired replaymaker | discord: victortb#9592
le try hard:

not a fan of 100 distance cuz u can only rush.
liked the punch to the arm.
last 2 hits r not cool.
in the first one u didn't even kicked.
the last was a rip which is not good in this situation.
pretty nice skeet btw.

slow and steady:

still 100 distance...
first 2 hits r cool but u ghosted into uke which is bad for the glitchs.
slap to the head was too too.
nice pose aswell.
liked this one more.
ok