So heres a quick madman that i spent about 2 hours on

ehh pretty good

opener was pretty generic, a lot of people use this opener from what ive seen

core was pretty cool, but you could make it look more powerful

punch was great, but you could try to get it all in one frame

For you

woah damn that looks cool

fairly standard opener but the jump was p nice
cool core
that punch i dont understand how you got both shoulders what the fuck
how the FUCK that last kick is so pretty
great pose
8.9/10 this is awesome.



wanna do a little collab at some point?

A bit slow, nice movement. A bit of flow would be nice, and I love the dm's! keep working.
7.999999999/10.1

idk, was pretty good
a little slow, id play around with that third hit trying to do some fancy spin or move into it, but shits nice
kicks and booms were all good, good job

So due to my inactivity i guess ill post 2 new projects im workin on, a pk and a new madman.
these will probably just get scrapped in the end, but i might aswell show what
a part of it is. :P

btw i suck at doing pks and i dont do them alot, well at all so thats why thats terrible, and for the madman i just cant get into the right position for a good dm even with that decent opener.

Nemesis:
weird.the opener is ok,a bit slow and awkward,but you got it for a good thing: that kick
didnt really liked the way you fully contracted the wrist,but the punch is alright.
boom was good...lul

about you movement:sometimes you look really stiff,try to make replays with alot of movements and stuff,work on it with creativity too.
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i dont know how to cnc parkours,so only the madman one:
opener is very cool as a wip,but try to land in a better pose,i dont really think this is going to get you to a good way to dms.

blood thing:
the run was twitchy af
its because of low tf, try to use a higher one :/
on the jump thingy i would expect pushing your self or something but that front flip ruined everything.
dark...:the opener was generally good
except for that last thing
remake it from there and it'll be great

D4RK 1NT3NT10NS WIP 4.rpl: Well the opener was alright I guess, I dont like the way you are moving your arms, its not looking too natural, try relaxing them a bit more.
The run was a bit twichy, as alpha said using higher tf might help you, tho if you dont contract and extend so much I guess you could handle using low tf. Try playing a bit more relaxed, your moves here were quite stiff.
You should have tried something diferent instead of that front flip too.

well heres the finished pk, now, time to finish the madman, ill post a sneak peek here
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This is completely pointless and should be ignored completely
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well forgot that existed