Toribash
Original Post
Nmasters31 Replay thread
starting to make replays, let me know what you guys think, ill dump whatever i already have here to start off. any cnc much appreciated, im aware i need to improve a lot you wont hurt my feelings i promise
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adding my self spar, one of my first attempts at sparring
Attached Files
(nm) 28.rpl (153.4 KB, 6 views)
(nm) flip.rpl (189.7 KB, 3 views)
(nm) light.rpl (82.4 KB, 4 views)
(nm) phase.rpl (59.9 KB, 3 views)
(nmasters31) attack.rpl (146.9 KB, 3 views)
(nmasters31) back kick.rpl (118.6 KB, 3 views)
(nmasters31) carbon.rpl (85.1 KB, 2 views)
(nmasters31) juggle.rpl (107.7 KB, 2 views)
(nm) self spar 1.rpl (263.2 KB, 5 views)
Last edited by Silent; Mar 30, 2017 at 10:01 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
[a]dventure
Bump
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new replay, my best work so far i think
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let me know what you think!
Attached Files
(nm) flips n kicks.rpl (194.7 KB, 3 views)
Last edited by Silent; Apr 4, 2017 at 05:39 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
[a]dventure
new manip replay, pretty proud. cnc much appreciated guys, ive got over 300 views id really really really appreciate it if some of yall would drop comments here- really makes a replay maker feel good/helps a ton- thanks!
Attached Files
(nm) resolution.rpl (91.1 KB, 5 views)
[a]dventure
(nm) resolution:

Hmmm. I liked the start and how you got uke into the air, its just that the replay feels a little bit sluggish. Some of your movements seemed a bit stiff. Also, make sure you hold your neck otherwise it kinda just flops around and doesnt look that great. I can tell that you are a beginner, but your movements are nice and it seems that you know how every part of the body works.

I'd give you a 6.5/10.
Thanks for the tips! Yes I am definitely a beginner haha, I definitely need to up
my speed
[a]dventure
Almost at 500 views!! Cnc really appreciated- even if all you have to say is "you suck" or "nice replay" I still appreciate it! Mostly flips and kicks/resolution/phase are the ones I wanna hear about- thanks!
[a]dventure
try using 200 ed to get a lot more speed, makes the replay flow better
nice manip, but try to spin him harder and faster
cool decap, but it could have had more power to it.

I like it, you have potential