I've been trying to make a good edit after my previous one (morte et dabo) but haven't found any luck since.

Since the help I'm getting from mastertech is garbage is not enough, I'm gonna ask the community how to improve the video.

If possible, not what to improve, but how to improve.

So instead of saying:
Horrible CC

I kindly ask you to instead say:
I suggest you add more shadows to your curves

That. I just want to actually make a decent looking video again.

Programs:
AE 14
MBL
QuickTime Player
Toribash

Song:
Bring Me The Horizon - Drown

Player(s):
Oblivion