Stand of Flow try not to kick off the ground like that I understand why you did it but try not too.
spins of grace try to utilize your neck joint more
in the last one night has awaken
that was great again try to use the neck joint more and be careful of twitching it
all three had instances were you twitched but your flow is amazing it you could learn to use your neck better and gain more momentum you'd be set
and don't go back and change the replays
keeps them and study them so you have something to go off of
over all though amazing work.
and remember no one is perfect so if some says "it's amazing flawless" then either they want you to fail or really don't care. keep it up!