The smile needs to go, emo`s never smile. The hair could be smoother, maybe have the red hair turn a dark-ish purple, becasue emo`s kinda like dark colors(durr). I`d give a 8.5/10
That is not true at all. You obviously dont know what emo means =/
Anyways, the flat parts of the hair should be pointed, add some better shading, and make the black line one the hair a lot thinner. Also, you should make the teeth more realistic. Overall though its pretty good. 7/10
Need to work on your execution mostly. Your concept is there but it's quite hard to understand for a type of appeal. Should add more detail and shapes into it for a more aesthetic approach.