Lemme be harsh with this one, since I'm a first.
Is that okay? Yeah, okay.
Opener was very generic, not much to say about it. But you should really try improvising more.
Transition from and to the first hit was nothing special, too. The way you made your arm stiff greatly reduced your momentum, but that's not really where all of the momentum builds up but it serves a lead. And seeing how you didn't do much with the lead it didn't put you in a very good position to do your second hit.
Nothing you can't fix though, this can be fast if you moved your lower just right.
Second hit with the grab on it had put you in worse position than you had already, and I can think of a few possibilities why you did that. Don't do it anyway. Because you were afloat and didn't have enough momentum to be fast enough, it looked really bad.
Third made you hit your head, blame the one above. ^^
(You probably didn't notice though because you had a shitload of disgusting 3D items on.)
First DM was pretty slick although it didn't show much, but I like it anyway.
Grab with the same hand was pretty not-okay, you rushed your decap.
I suggest you spend more time in replaymaking even though I know you're not much of a fun of that, but if you actually want to somehow get better at doing it, you should.
Also, you seemed to have moved in a -30-ish manner, so why not make your next replay a -30 one?
4/10