Heres mine ;)

Gah,, that opener was hard to me.. But here is my simple splitter.

i'd like to replace my entry with this

.....

The last hit in this replay was a bitch.

This is not the best i can do, but now i got a chance.
and dont say its bad, cuz i know it.

May I post an edited version?

Just edit your post, you can swap it as many times as you like before the deadline.

Here goes.

Can I know what will you be judging this on,is their a formality of does it depend on the replay.For example,this opener can make a good dance replay :P.