Again i just started, i need some helpful tips on improving this spar.

is that ur first self-spar replay? Also the ending is boring a bit.

This is my first time i noticed i fell forward a bit but im not sure how to stay upwards but i cant. im not sure how to make the ending more interesting, how do you think i should?

its great for first spar

Well Here is my first multiplayer spar i think it turned out perfect

1. Your 2nd spar seemed quite a bit stiff
2. When you're spinning, don't start spinning and stop to spin the other way

You're doing good for beginning sparring. Keep working on fluid moves.

How do i become more fluid in my movements?

You are doing Great ! for a Brown belt sparring! keep up

So I rate this 4 or 5/10 you were stiff for all of the replay not much flow but there were a few times when you had some a lot of twitching going on and it wasn't the most realistic thing that you could do.

sp self spars are hard yes I know but you can do a lot better if you take a bit more time to plan out your next move since there is no rush. if this was your first nj but you can still improve always.