its not bad, lacks a bit of style, feels like you just made some of the lines because you HAD to, some of the straighter lines and cutouts feel forced rather than felt. especially on that area you just filled in.
eyes dont match the lines from the rest of the texture, if you used similar lines from the shape underneath the eyes, it would have brought it all together, rather than just traditional eye shapes
bringing the shape on the chin all the way round the bottom to the back would have made the shapes look more solid, like they had a base and gives some cool colouring options that work nicely ingame
too many individual elements, try work with larger major shapes in the 3 areas, front back and side. gets rid of the repetitive lines that you find when just filling in for the sake of filling in.
overall, that layout isnt too bad, some decent lines, but its spoilt by the bad ones and feels repetitive as it goes towards the back of the texture.
also bringing the eyes in like hours mentioned would do alot, although that would leave you needing to fix the sides and bring them in. i would suggest removing the eyes, and creating eye impressions with the empty space, and filling in slightly on the sides and centre
Last edited by BenDover; May 6, 2012 at 09:29 PM.