not my usual kind of style, but i think this one is worth posting anyway

well your dms are alright but your movement is what i am in real life hot trash
its very clunky and your relying on grabbing onto uke in order to move around
improvement on your movement

pretty much what Z said above. Your dms were ok, just try to get some inspiration for movements, relax more your legs. A thing to be noticed is that the first punch had a really good technique.

Good luck with the improvements. Hope you get some dope material.

i see what you mean.
the left leg looks stiff especially, doesnt look too good.
and a little forward motion would have made the replay more fluid.
thanks for the critique.

BUT

You wont find a fluid and relaxed replay at any point of time in this thread though.
I think there are enough toribashers who make those.
I'm working on finding my own style, which i want to be mostly on hold-all base and a lot of stiff elbows and knees.

Still ive got a lot to learn. especially when it comes to gaining speed.

here is a more exaggerated replay which could give you a hint to which direction i wanna go.

That first little kick was cute lol

haven't seen a double shoulders in a while, nice dude.

torso punch was well executed, but I feel you haven't gotten quite used to the gravity yet so the rest of your body looked a bit tense.

The stuff after that was a little on the stiff side. The ideas you got are awesome though, skeeting uke with his own hand in one single motion is pretty boss.

Just work a bit on your movement, and you should have some rockin replays.

gjgj

Thank you.
the tense look is probably due to the hold all in every frame lol.

woop woop

10/10 Oaks
Best replay maker ever, definitely! No jokes. Lol
In all serious now, jokes aside, your dm's look really good. The only thing i saw that is worth pointing out is that in your "older" rpls you only use the part of the body you're using to attack, so the rest of your body looks rigid. But in the "shwoop shwoop" the movements are already more fluid and organic than in the older ones. So i think you already overcame the problem. And i thought that shwoop shwoop looked pretty good, even though it felt likes something is missing at the end.
I'd give a 8/10 imho. Keep up though, the rpls are looking good

8/10 is exactly what i strive for hehe
btw i dont post the replays right after i made them.
some are new, some are like 5 years old

also thanks for the critique

this one is new and funny :>
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id also like to hear some comments on "too much is too much"