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my First render

sorry for small size.. will post big one l8r
please give C&C done with
DAZ studio and C4D
Hi it's Praeter
Awesome for a first render.
I wanna see more from you , if you need tips or anything like that PM me!
RelaxAll was life. Feels bad to be an oldie.
err...its abit messy,the legs are not perfect yet,and that random doll in the back isnt cool..Your tori needs fixing.
But other than that it looks cool.
Last edited by CoKe; Feb 7, 2009 at 11:27 AM.

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Coke is right , I just noticed the legs.
Looks like they're totally off xD
RelaxAll was life. Feels bad to be an oldie.
you can do better.

1st off: Don't use C4D's built in models if their not modified. it makes you look lazy.

2nd off: the legs (as stated) are way off, try doing that in toribash (bet you can't ;P)

3rd off: It's nice that you're trying out more complex scenes right off the bat, but learn the basics first (looks like you almost have them)

it's an ok render for your first, remember: never give up, you're at the bottom, but there's nowhere to go but up.
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Lolz nice render ! i like et and yes about the legs XD
9/10 very nice
Centuries Of Damn
Originally Posted by dbuhos View Post
Lolz nice render ! i like et and yes about the legs XD
9/10 very nice

err....

Anyway yeah i agree with Stups,I mean my first 3ds max render was simple,learn the basics first before trying too much.

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thanks guys for ur C&c ill try working with basics.. polygon modeling and stuff...
Also ill work on the thighs
Hi it's Praeter
nice, 6/10, looks really messy though

legs need work, and the texture quality looks really low, and why did u use one of ur textures on a furniture peice?
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i didnt... i made each texture diff and yes thank you for pointing out things already explained....
Hi it's Praeter