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Ancient's replays
Okay, so after some huge fails on my other thread ( it died like 5 months ago) i decided to make a new one. I know i havent gotten much better, but i think this is enough to make a new thread and show it.
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And more replays
Attached Files
#Real - Become wind.rpl (253.8 KB, 18 views)
#Real - Fire is Destrction.rpl (238.6 KB, 7 views)
#Real - Going Digital.rpl (109.3 KB, 14 views)
#Real - Phantom.rpl (166.9 KB, 10 views)
#Real - Tempting voices.rpl (140.2 KB, 7 views)
#Real - Big bang.rpl (41.2 KB, 11 views)
#Real - Be the leaf.rpl (118.0 KB, 10 views)
#Real - Unicorns.rpl (143.7 KB, 10 views)
#Real - Razor Sharp.rpl (101.9 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by ancient; May 3, 2015 at 11:50 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Big Bang - unfinished, try to dismember only abs, it doesnt really look good with that glute dismembering.

Going Digital - Nice dismembers, but it seems like it isn't on 100 dismemberthreshold.

Phantom - looks like you struggled to get the dms. Wasn't enjoyable to watch

Unicorns - Again struggled to get dms.

I'd rate 7/10

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Originally Posted by Dr_Who View Post

Going Digital - Nice dismembers, but it seems like it isn't on 100 dismemberthreshold.

Hmh try it for yourself, press 'e' And try to kick something
if it wont dm its not 100 - but if you kick hard ofc its gonna seem lower than 100
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Well, anyway i took your advice and this is what i came up with
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Hmmm more replays
Attached Files
#Real - Big Bang 2.rpl (32.9 KB, 8 views)
#Real - Big Bang 3.rpl (35.6 KB, 7 views)
#Real - Mentally challenged.rpl (52.2 KB, 15 views)
Last edited by ancient; May 3, 2015 at 11:25 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Hey Ancient
-Big Bang 2:
I really like the kick but the replay would be better if u did a pose or something.
-Big Bang 3:
Same at Big Bang 2
-Shot Bang Shoot............:
Don't contract wrists in the beginning part of the replay,just contract them in a grab or something else. Don't grab after a dismemberment looks like u r improvising and u don't have an idea of what to do. The first kick is nice but don't kick with your shin it doesn't looks good like in real life and the second kick was a lot better than the first one.
-Mentally Challenged:
U used the extended glutes opener which is nice but than u moved ur chest and the other joints in a strange way for 2 times (frames 470-430) and the contracted wrist too ( hold it,don't relax). Than u did a nice head grab and kick him in the nuts -.-...the second kick was Really Nice and u did a decap too with the power of your kick best part of the replay. U need to work in the poses after a dm.
I'll give u a 7.5/10.
Doing poses is hard and boring for me.
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Woah more replays!
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#AC - Flashy Generation.rpl (181.4 KB, 8 views)
#AC - Time slip.rpl (128.8 KB, 11 views)
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-Flashy Generation
I'm not really good at parkour so i can't CnC it but the grab looks orrible and a lot of things r not usefull.
-Bringing my image to the void
I guess nice opener but than u grab the body before a dismemberment and this doesn't look cool,the kick is nice the punch too but ur arms r one into the other so maybe u can fix it,the headkick is quite nice but maybe looks better if u didn't hit it with the shin but the foot. The pose is quite nice but i think u can do something better.
-Time slip
The opener is nice but can be better if u didn't relaxed ur wrist but hold it and the kick in the ground doesn't looks cool( it will stop ur momentum of the spin). Than u grab before the kick but nvm i can accept it this time u did a first nice kick and a lovely second kick for the split and a nice smash into the ground for the head but u lost ur wrist :/. And u need to work on the poses, they r not boring.
I'll give u a 7/10
Originally Posted by NICOLAS135 View Post
-Flashy Generation
I'm not really good at parkour so i can't CnC it but the grab looks orrible and a lot of things r not usefull.
-Bringing my image to the void
I guess nice opener but than u grab the body before a dismemberment and this doesn't look cool,the kick is nice the punch too but ur arms r one into the other so maybe u can fix it,the headkick is quite nice but maybe looks better if u didn't hit it with the shin but the foot. The pose is quite nice but i think u can do something better.
-Time slip
The opener is nice but can be better if u didn't relaxed ur wrist but hold it and the kick in the ground doesn't looks cool( it will stop ur momentum of the spin). Than u grab before the kick but nvm i can accept it this time u did a first nice kick and a lovely second kick for the split and a nice smash into the ground for the head but u lost ur wrist :/. And u need to work on the poses, they r not boring.
I'll give u a 7/10

There was no way i could keep the wrist though anyway yeaaahhh since you dont know parkour ill say this nice and slowly, grabbing in parkour is only then if you fail hardly and you need balance. so there you have it
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Woohoho Yeah! Another replay. I'm really proud of this one ;)
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#AC - Immortal.rpl (84.9 KB, 14 views)
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Another replay \o/ i really like this one!
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#A - meh.rpl (98.7 KB, 11 views)
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