hey bb <3
so opener was pretty neat, but kinda dissapointed because you broke your flow so early on in the replay, and the fact that you broke the with a grab makes it more dissapointing, but you got into a really nice position after you kicked uke in the dick, and the spin you did after that was really nice, the thing that caught my attention was your floppy head though, i'm kind of a verdict to floppy heads, but its fine because your spin covered that up, the kicks were really nice, it had speed, and it looked like it really had power in it, even though it only got 3 dms, which is still fine by me.
you're getting better and better, maybe i would suggest to try and spin in one direction, and keep that momentum and flow, without breaking it early on, but overall, the replay was neat.