As people have mentioned above, hair lines are quite thick.
The eyes are really good for a first try.
The mouth and nose should be higher up, sorry.
Originally Posted by
Surge
pretty good for a first head. first thing that comes to mind is that the hair shine could be thinner or have some transparency
It seem to have some transparency so that's not the problem, I think it was just overdone.
Would've looked better if you only did it on one side of the head, preferrably in the north east direction so that it's still visable from the front but doesn't bring too much attention.
You could've simply make it fade in and out to achive a pretty realistic look.
Nice head overall, keep up the great work!