Toribash
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Corgi Does Things
hello everybody, I'm some dude from some time ago.


I'm really rusty but here
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opener is pretty good, i love the use of uke to increase the spin

while the transition from manip to dm was executed cleanly and flows well (barring the slight twitch of the left leg) the idea of using the grab to do it feels a little cheap, with some tweaking perhaps launching with the right leg would serve the same function

dms are alright, the 1st and 2nd kicks are nice clean and quick, but it looked like your left knee was too contracted to extend quickly for the decap

the boom is nice but the way your arms stiffened up, body leaned forward and the right knee relaxed made it look less forceful

overall it was a bit too grabby but it was pretty decent
Last edited by sSLight; Dec 9, 2018 at 08:50 AM.
this whole thing is masterpiece

the opener was a bit meh but what you do next is fucking awesome. I love how you used uke to gain momentum and the manip was subtle but beautiful. The dms execution was neat but there isn't too much about the dms itself, even though I absolutely loved them

I don't see the point of this bodypart manip (whatever bodypart it is) but felt gentle and smooth as well, except when you suddenly kick it

great job
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