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Tbash wants head, so I made head
Ok so Im doing this weird robotic thing, I don't quite like robotic stuff but here is my best shot:

Image of this thingy



CNC please!

Program: SketchBook
Last edited by Veoo; Mar 1, 2017 at 04:49 AM. Reason: yeah cause u can use garageband to make textures
Well, I don't exactly know what to say. It's a robot head.

The scrapes on the metal on the front are mirrored, so that kind of throws it off a bit for me, but that's just personal preference. Other than that, I don't know what else to say. It's really dark so it's hard to see any detail.

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I find the "Black" of the plates and the black of the gaps to be too close. I had to turn my brightness to the Maximum to be able to clearly differentiate them.
Maybe go for a lighter color on the plates or add the blue glow in a very soft variant to the gaps.

Also it looks way too symmetrical. Try to add some scratches/ other damage on one side

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Originally Posted by WeooWeoo View Post
Well, I don't exactly know what to say. It's a robot head.

The scrapes on the metal on the front are mirrored, so that kind of throws it off a bit for me, but that's just personal preference. Other than that, I don't know what else to say. It's really dark so it's hard to see any detail.

oh, : (

I guess you're right it is pretty dark : ( (( ( Ill try to fix in the next wip


Originally Posted by Freelancer View Post
Nothing in this texture tells me it is a robot. Clear your head and imagine no one ever told you this is a robot head. Would you still consider this to be a robot? Damn thing could be a fucking funky light fixture from IKEA!
Dude get your shit together. You know what I had to do back when I was as young as you? I had to take my bloody ass to the library to learn some tricks! I am confident that you know how hard it is to move your ass to a library just to learn something that you would probably never even use for the rest of your life. I mean you are from a generation of ass sitters. So to you this library thing is a fucking nightmare.

Now what if I told you that you have the internet at your fingertips? What is the internet? It is a library. And if you choose to spend 99% of your miserable time on the internet jerking off to everything in the porn section, rather than looking up tutorials on being an artist, then maybe, just maybe you should stop posting "art" and go back to wasting your brain remembering who Lisa Ann is!

I feel like this is mean't to be really mean
: (

you didn't give me any suggestions on how to fix it though : (

Originally Posted by Reta View Post
In full awareness that this might get deleted again because holy shit art board rules:

I find the "Black" of the plates and the black of the gaps to be too close. I had to turn my brightness to the Maximum to be able to clearly differentiate them.
Maybe go for a lighter color on the plates or add the blue glow in a very soft variant to the gaps.

Also it looks way too symmetrical. Try to add some scratches/ other damage on one side

I totally agree with the "holy shit art board rules" part : (

Ok Ill make it less symmetrical that makes sense, but on the darkness thing, my computer has a super high brightness and I always draw with it all the way up so I guess thats my bad, Ill try to fix this : (
Hmmm. I'm with Freelancer here, you always make a new thread with a new unfinished head that, lets be honest, are getting worse and worse. So far I didn't see you taking the cnc, you read only the ones that say "ooh good head-thingy" and ignore the ones that will make you improve, also, three days with no comments on the sketch and no progress at all? Who is the head maker? You or the forum? Seriously... You make any artist of the world and every normal person ashamed.

Anyways, there's little I could say that wasn't said before, check your older theads, and learn at least the basics of lightning, for the love of god. And draw like it matters to you.

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i like the eye texture like how it looks little bit 3d but, still should work a bit more on it... i don't have much experience of art though but just wanted to say, bring the eyes bit closer so it looks more realistic
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