One thing that you should know about me, is I'm an extensive, and very harsh CnCer. I do this for everybody, even if it's an amazing replay.
Ok, Marrez.
Unimpressive b-twist to unimpressive cork:
I felt like your opener was a little flimsy, but there really wasn't anything wrong with it. The way you do your first hop after the sweep kick was weird, you moved your arms in a way that might suggest a much larger leap that what actually happened. The spread of your pecs didn't really look fantastic during this leap. I noticed that you caught your hand on your leg a bit during the sweep kick-ish thing right before the b-twist. Multiple times throughout the replay, your wrists contract. Some of my bigger pet peeves include contracted wrists and relaxed necks. The b-twist was really nice, nice open rotation, and a good set up for a cork landing. I don't like how your knee jittered on your cork's launch, it should have been left alone. The cork was pretty nice, if a little balled up. You need to work on your timing to get more height. Then, you also won't have to unravel your chest the way you did to get the extra spin on the way down. Nice transition to the pose, and nice pose itself. Although this replay had a few jitters, it was overall really smooth. This was a great replay
Now. My first replay here since I've become a part of this org. I worked on my corks, especially my set-ups and my openness (thanks Flash). I think I need to be a bit more creative, as corks are really generic. Considering this is only my fifth replay (with corks) since I did my first cork, I've improved tons. My old ones were really ugly. Enjoy.