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Very nice dude. I loved the opener. The Dm's had power and speed behind them but I don't really like the last Dm. Gj. 8/10
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Sep 21, 2015 Old
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why the 10 frames of nothing at the start? useless
don't like how your moved a few joints at 490, and then waited 70 frames to move more.
lifting uke like that was a cool idea, but not executed well - maybe get some momentum and contract abs next time.
the chest punch was cool, but the kick wasn't aimed nicely
to get a stronger cork you need to fully contract your pecs
pose was cool, but transition should of been less stiff
attached is a kick improvement to what you had... i was going for just what you kicked off, but i got decap aswell
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kick.rpl (85.7 KB, 4 views)
Last edited by usio; Sep 21, 2015 at 11:23 AM.
https://gyazo.com/39b77a287b11733d965f0eab2fc9357d
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Sep 23, 2015 Old
Originally Posted by usio View Post
[S] Mobile
why the 10 frames of nothing at the start? useless
don't like how your moved a few joints at 490, and then waited 70 frames to move more.
lifting uke like that was a cool idea, but not executed well - maybe get some momentum and contract abs next time.
the chest punch was cool, but the kick wasn't aimed nicely
to get a stronger cork you need to fully contract your pecs
pose was cool, but transition should of been less stiff
attached is a kick improvement to what you had... i was going for just what you kicked off, but i got decap aswell

ty?
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It had to happen at some point...
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[t] Such Realism 2.rpl (198.2 KB, 4 views)
Last edited by MasterTech; Sep 23, 2015 at 08:25 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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