Jul 13, 2012
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#41
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ub3r
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 3,350
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well,the opener was too stiff.
the second hit was ok,but you cn make a boom,not only split.
and the last hit was look weird.
and the pose was cool.
but i know you are better than this.
*requesting cnc
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Jul 18, 2012
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#42
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Senior Member
10th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 881
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I got another one, wasn't sure on how to end it. Give me your ideas on it.
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Jul 18, 2012
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#43
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ub3r
6th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Apr 2009
Posts: 2,814
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The movement in is quite fluid, that is a likable trait in that replay. The hits are messy. Especially the first one it looked really odd for me.
Anyways, I do think you could squeeze in a decap somewhere in that replay
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Jul 18, 2012
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#44
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Member
2nd Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Jul 2011
Posts: 330
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Proxun #1, I give a 5/10, great DM's but that replay had so mcuh more potential, if you would've delayed your opener, and made it a boomhit, it would've looked phenomenal. Good work though, I liked it.
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Hug the mau5trap
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Jul 18, 2012
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#45
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Senior Member
10th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 881
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Spry I was looking for a strange but new opener.
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Jul 19, 2012
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#46
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ub3r
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 3,350
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the replay was stiff in the beginning.
the dm was okay for me.
but the kick wasnt clean
at the end you should do a fast skeet.
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Jul 27, 2012
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#47
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Senior Member
10th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 881
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Back with a new replay, tell me what you think. Bad or good comments, I don't mind.
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Jul 27, 2012
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#48
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ub3r
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 3,350
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well.
its better than your prev replays.
but you r so stiff.
dms was alright and some dm was nice.
but stiff make your dms weird.
pose was cool.
7,5/10
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Jul 27, 2012
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#49
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Forumite
Black Belt
Join Date: Nov 2011
Posts: 1,700
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He wasn't really that stiff.
The opener was okay.
The dms are extremely grabby, very messy.
Pose was bad.
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Jul 28, 2012
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#50
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Senior Member
10th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 881
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Another one, pose was better in this one.
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