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Old Mar 14, 2015   #1
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Hello!
Here i will post most of my replays!
PLEASE GO TO THE LAST PAGE
CNC IS HIGHLY APPRECIATED AND I WILL LOVE YOU <3

So to get started heres one of my replays!
Enjoy
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Old Mar 15, 2015   #2
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I'm gonna bump this for ya!
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Old Mar 15, 2015   #3
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Thx Terada

CnC please guys!
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Old Mar 17, 2015   #4
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CnC please guys! still sticking with my replay (at the first post)

Im gonna go ahead and bump this
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Old Mar 18, 2015   #5
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I hate to see people receive no cnc.

So here goes nothing:

#Conp

Frames 1500-1450
Not much really happened here, it was a bit of a generic lowering start. Nothing really too wrong with it. A bit boring to watch but I suppose its okay for tricking.

Frames 1449-1400
The way that you transitioned was decent but expected. It was a bit twitchy but was not awful. My main complaint is the way that you extend your leg. It just looks weird.

Frames 1399-1275
The first spin was alright. You were really stiff and it moved at a semi-slow pace. My only real problem with it is how stiff it was for a trick that tried to flow so nicely.

Frames 1274-1200
AAAAAAAAA
I did not like how immediately after you landed you just extended your leg and jumped back up into a really awkward thing. I think it mainly looked really awkward while in the air because of the way your abs were positioned. Back to my main issue, the immediate jump was a bit out of place in my opinion. You could have taken a little time to make it flow better and set up the next trick properly.

Frames 1199-1020
This was super meh. The spin was a bit held, you tried to do a pretty cool backflip spin thing but the execution was flawed.

Frames 1019-0
The last spin had the same problem as the rest, it was a bit twitchy and held.

Overall is is not a bad start but it looked a little rushed. If you take more time to get rid of the obvious twitchy things or the times where the body is too close making it look strange you could vastly improve quickly. Just try to mess with being a bit more relaxed and taking a little more time to edit than you already do.

I am not personally a tricker, however I based what I said off of what I know. So don't think I'm just talking you down keep up the replay making. You can improve fast if you keep with it.
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Old Mar 19, 2015   #6
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Thank you in the making of a new replay! why nobody CnC here? ._.

Anyway thank you Ealtrik help alot! btw trying not to ghost so often
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Old Mar 21, 2015   #7
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Yes im aware im inactive to this
Yes im aware i get no CnC
Yes im aware im bumping this
Yes im aware that I made a new replay
Yes im aware that it sucks.
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Old Mar 25, 2015   #8
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:|
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Bump oh and btw the replay IS A COLLAB WITH Terada
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Old Mar 26, 2015   #9
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Bump u son
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Old Mar 27, 2015   #10
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Im confused on weather or not you are aware but time for some cnc
Hallucinating:
The opener was really slow (100 frames is too much)
you got into a nice little spin but the way you got into it with the contracted knees i didn't really like
You transitioned really well into the recap but the skeet was a bit unprofessional.
The end pose was good, but your left elbow didn't look like it knew where to go, and small but avoidable detail, your knee is off the ground.

Id give it a 7.5/10
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