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Old Dec 5, 2015   #1
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Catalyst's Replay Thread
Welcome to Catalyst's replay Thread! Here I will post SP replays and I want YOU to CnC them.

Here's my first ones.
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File Type: rpl #Catalyst Glory.rpl (68.1 KB, 15 views)
File Type: rpl #Catalyst 3rd Degree burn.rpl (52.1 KB, 7 views)
File Type: rpl [S]uper [H]uman v2.rpl (44.2 KB, 7 views)

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Old Dec 5, 2015   #2
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Glory: opener is okay, I don't really like 100 ed replays

cool decap

3rd degree burn: this replay looks really rushed, the entire replay is basically just the opener

Super Human: there wasnt really a opener

you used grab for the split, which is bad

arm dm could be a decap instead

uke was in a perfect position for you to skeet him
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Old Dec 5, 2015   #3
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Originally Posted by RayWill135 View Post
Glory: opener is okay, I don't really like 100 ed replays

cool decap

3rd degree burn: this replay looks really rushed, the entire replay is basically just the opener

Super Human: there wasnt really a opener

you used grab for the split, which is bad

arm dm could be a decap instead

uke was in a perfect position for you to skeet him

Thanks for the CnC I should've clarified that all of them are WIP'S. Thanks for your time to CnC them though
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Old Dec 13, 2015   #4
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Hey i'm finally back with another replay please CnC this took me a while and it's not perfect.
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Old Dec 14, 2015   #5
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Ayy you copied one of my replay names

1738:

opener was slow, you want to move right after the initial opener

punch looked weak, try to make it look more powerful

the movements were very floopy after this, but I don't really mind floppy openers for some reason

punch looked weak, like the decap punch

kick can get more dms

last kick can be better
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Old Dec 15, 2015   #6
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Yup the opener was slow, the punch could have been better if you had aimed better.

There were many parts in which I think you could have got some boomhits, maybe work a bit more on your aiming?
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Old Dec 16, 2015   #7
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Originally Posted by Onsola View Post
Yup the opener was slow, the punch could have been better if you had aimed better.

There were many parts in which I think you could have got some boomhits, maybe work a bit more on your aiming?

Thanks for the cnc.
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Yes i finally made a BoomHit. It's not perfect but CnC please.
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Old Dec 18, 2015   #8
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boomhit - nice cata, opener was good but the transition to boom can be better.
anyways, good job.
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Old Dec 19, 2015   #9
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Originally Posted by Arakata View Post
boomhit - nice cata, opener was good but the transition to boom can be better.
anyways, good job.

Thank you so much it's a great privilege for you to compliment me. Thanks man I know the transition wasn't that great but man I had this opener for a couple of years so i decided to make something out of it thansk for the CnC man!
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Old Dec 25, 2015   #10
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bump
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Wow this amazed me please cnc.....(Don't CnC the opener for Furreal Friends v3 that was done like 2 years ago)
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File Type: rpl [M] Fate WIP.rpl (63.3 KB, 7 views)
File Type: rpl [OS] Emotional Distress.rpl (49.4 KB, 9 views)
File Type: rpl [M] Furreal Friends v3.rpl (82.8 KB, 32 views)

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