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[ME] Tori's Haiku
[ME] Tori's Haiku
Your objective in this event is to write a haiku related to toribash.
A haiku is a poem which exists of three lines.
The amount of syllables are 5-7-5
You must create the haiku entirely by yourself.
You can have one submission only.
You can change the submission as much as you like.
Only Monks and former monks can enter.
The use of language
The use of themes from Toribash
The quality of the haiku
1st:
2nd:
18th of March - 2015
Your objective in this event is to write a haiku related to toribash.
A haiku is a poem which exists of three lines.
The amount of syllables are 5-7-5
Example of a haiku
You must create the haiku entirely by yourself.
You can have one submission only.
You can change the submission as much as you like.
Only Monks and former monks can enter.
The use of language
The use of themes from Toribash
The quality of the haiku
1st:
2nd:
18th of March - 2015
Last edited by TimmyboyG; Mar 14, 2015 at 01:40 PM.
i am a bird now - Lil B
Hardkore
Yo Gunk, Chuck's line is fine, I'm pretty sure tori is two syllables. Anyway, heres mine:
The sweat is pouring,
The streak counter reads thirteen,
Oops, I just misclicked.
The sweat is pouring,
The streak counter reads thirteen,
Oops, I just misclicked.
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