Gogogo
wut
All my work starts sloppy, but as you've seen in my previous works, it always ends up fine.
Control is currently fixing all the mapping problems.
It's too pixel-ly and odd, I'd recommend you to blend stuff
In my opinion you used too much contrast, quite a bit off mapping, which can be centered,. and look at the edges of the hair, they're sharp, if you want to follow a character draw it with no style or nothing, just copy it.