Maybe I was a bit harsh, maybe I'm a bit drunk right now? lol

Either way I made a similar mistake with a michinima I did (no mentioning it's name due to how diabolical the first half of it it was)

The best way to keep people's interest is either with jokes or constant action. As you've currently not displayed a whole lot of action you need to concentrat on the humour aspect.

Failing that (and a possible lack of graphical prowess - no accusations or assumptions made) nab a copy of Particle Illusion (or a similar product) and use it to add some action. You'll be surprised at the difference a bit of gore will make.