sometimes you really pop off in your own weird little way, like that foot grab/ass spin at frame 192, the only real issues i see are ones that you will naturally solve with time, for example the stiffness in some parts (the opener being the best example of that), SOME of your hits feel a bit weak due to the lack of experience with ghosting (but you are getting there, and you will keep getting better and better the more you try), you get the idea
overall i would say you are pretty good, and time will do the rest, just keep making more replays, id love to see you in a few months from now