Good Start: The opener was a bit "wobbly"
I think the manip was pretty cool, could make it better though.
You seemed a bit too loose and relaxed.
Dem Friez: Opener was nice, wrist DM made me giggle
though at one point it looked like your left leg got stuck on Uke.
So guys, I'm pretty much done with this replay, but I can't seem to end it.
Right now I have a shitty headspin because I can't seem to keep good looking balance after the boom hit (Unless I hold onto Uke's arm to keep me on the ground)
So, I was wondering if you guys could give me some feedback on what you think I should do to end it better, or if someone could edit it so I can see an example.
Thanks, Lucid.
I think the manip was pretty cool, could make it better though.
You seemed a bit too loose and relaxed.
Dem Friez: Opener was nice, wrist DM made me giggle
though at one point it looked like your left leg got stuck on Uke.
So guys, I'm pretty much done with this replay, but I can't seem to end it.
Right now I have a shitty headspin because I can't seem to keep good looking balance after the boom hit (Unless I hold onto Uke's arm to keep me on the ground)
So, I was wondering if you guys could give me some feedback on what you think I should do to end it better, or if someone could edit it so I can see an example.
Thanks, Lucid.
Originally Posted by patrickooo
Zeto: Thing you done in the beginning was good. Would not call it manipulation because it had grab.
You was too stiff before the kick. The kick itself wasn't aimed good and not really clean.
Next kick was okay, couldn't be a boom because of the position. It could be done with a punch, it would be better.
Next punchy was good.
Next dismemberment was good too.
Not really impressive.
3263441: The beginning was like a chicken sitting on her eggs.
I've done some edits on your replay, it's attached.
It could be done better than I did but I'm bad at making replays on my brother's PC.
Dam guys, CnC your mates's replays before you post yours.
DatSkip: Punch was good in the beginning.
Decap was good, it was flowing well, but it really clean.
Legs dismemberment was good, but it was grab, so blah.
Pecs dismemberment was just with the spin -.-
Skeet was alright, maybe it could be done as a dismemberment.
Nota: CnC'd the beginning before.
Boom wasn't clean. No no no no no no, not even a little clean.
If you dismembered the gluts together, it could be cooler.
I like the boom hits,
You looked fluid and it looked kinda nice
I'm ready for my daily dose of cringe ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Alright, quick cnc to show I'm active and stuff.
emg
Nice replay overall, I like the balance in it, but your hits are weak. You should try for some booms or something, and don't kick if Uke is too close as it looks messy and weak. I like the pose.
326
Good manip, should go for a boom at frame 190 or so with your leg. A little floppy though.
Notaboss
Meh, you kicked the body twice in a row with the same leg, kinda kills the flow.
Split wasn't too clean, after that was just messy, but I liked the decap for some reason.
Pose on "z" wasn't too good but the other one was good.
Lucid
Nice replay, should have tried for a boom at the second hit, but the last hit was nice. Try throwing the hand at the end up, I have a quick edit to show you. I admit the end isn't very smooth, but meh.
No time to cnc Afterlife and say how amazingly amazing it is, I've got to go.
emg
Nice replay overall, I like the balance in it, but your hits are weak. You should try for some booms or something, and don't kick if Uke is too close as it looks messy and weak. I like the pose.
326
Good manip, should go for a boom at frame 190 or so with your leg. A little floppy though.
Notaboss
Meh, you kicked the body twice in a row with the same leg, kinda kills the flow.
Split wasn't too clean, after that was just messy, but I liked the decap for some reason.
Pose on "z" wasn't too good but the other one was good.
Lucid
Nice replay, should have tried for a boom at the second hit, but the last hit was nice. Try throwing the hand at the end up, I have a quick edit to show you. I admit the end isn't very smooth, but meh.
No time to cnc Afterlife and say how amazingly amazing it is, I've got to go.
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