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nice, if I have something to tell you:
-during the jump, you can relax your arm to be more fluid, sure only if it don't affect the landing.
-during the punch, your right arm still lower, it is a little bit annoying to Watch because it like if he was blocked.
but without that little point, it should be really cool ^^

I made a funny replay where I loose something too it's "my aaarmm!!!" this is a remake of "Tunder" too.
you should take a look at "Effeciency 5" the final pose is cool
Skill is a multiplayer replay, with best save ever lol
and legacy is a cool single player replay.

Have fun :3
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#Yolo My Aaarmm!!!.rpl (156.2 KB, 7 views)
#Manip Efficiency 5.rpl (174.8 KB, 7 views)
Legacy.rpl (160.7 KB, 6 views)
Skill.rpl (49.3 KB, 6 views)
#D Thunder.rpl (178.1 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by Astral; Apr 19, 2014 at 10:32 PM.
Elle couuurt, Elle coooourt! LA MAAAAaaaAaladiiiie d'amOOoour! Dans le c... (cœur) des enfaaants! De 16 à 77 ans!
Nice, very nice. I like Thunder, precise and effective.

the Manip replay, is nice, fluid. But I will say that I dislike the grab to the arm you do at the start. I think that if you maybe hit uke up with your hand rather than grabbing him.

it would make the manipulation smoother.

I like the rest though

note: thanks for the tips on my WIP will work on it soon.
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The finished product, what does everyone think?
Attached Files
Prowler - Lost my touch.rpl (149.7 KB, 13 views)
Last edited by prowlerLA9; Apr 20, 2014 at 03:53 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Toribash Media |[TeamWushu]
lol that really cool ^^ maybe just don't spin like that at the end, you can let a feet (the right one) touching the ground to stop the rotation.

about my manip, atm I have no friction on uke, I don't know how to push him in a good direction without grabbing :/
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I keep the opener of "efficiency 5" to make a madman, this is a wip because Idk what can I do after dm the second arm, I make something random after. help me please.
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ok the final version, I think Imma going to keep it ^^
+ Prow's like pose at the end
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#Wip.rpl (199.6 KB, 7 views)
#Mad Into My Battleground.rpl (218.6 KB, 11 views)
Last edited by Astral; Apr 20, 2014 at 08:08 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Elle couuurt, Elle coooourt! LA MAAAAaaaAaladiiiie d'amOOoour! Dans le c... (cœur) des enfaaants! De 16 à 77 ans!
I tried myself on tricking
Enjoy
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Elle couuurt, Elle coooourt! LA MAAAAaaaAaladiiiie d'amOOoour! Dans le c... (cœur) des enfaaants! De 16 à 77 ans!
Recent spar by me and XeV0 (Apex) hope you enjoy it.

by the way all tips are welcome, and I'm sorry the last punch wasn't as awesome as we wanted.
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Spar with XeV0.rpl (813.6 KB, 10 views)
Toribash Media |[TeamWushu]
lol that was not fair ^^
I tried to manipulate without grabbing (just 1 moment but that was a mistake you can't see it no influence) just manipulate no dm, tell me I got a opportunity to decap but nah I didn't.
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#Luminate.rpl (194.7 KB, 8 views)
Elle couuurt, Elle coooourt! LA MAAAAaaaAaladiiiie d'amOOoour! Dans le c... (cœur) des enfaaants! De 16 à 77 ans!
Good to know that my training is entertaining you.
Today i continued my training and I realize that instead of thinking about how to gain victory I shod just punch the guy in the face.
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des 324.rpl (30.2 KB, 8 views)
des punching some more 2.rpl (102.0 KB, 7 views)
Last edited by Desiderius; Apr 29, 2014 at 04:47 PM.
about the spar between Xevo and Prowler I noticed some point and I start with Xevo bad point:
-I don't like the way you hit the ground to get an impulsion like frame
1152-576
-don't rotate your chest during a jump, yours legs are a bit bad looking like at the frame
500~
-and last point you are a bit too much at horizontal
but:
nice way to move your body, good fluidity sometimes your tori look very good like at the frame 691.
good opener.
good way to use your arm, maybe a bit too much long-time raised for me.
to Prow:
-you know what I think about your main default, your elbows are too much contracted it give the impression your tori make minimalistic moves. like frames:
1102-1346-820
-you force a bit the rotation to keep your tori stable it break the fluidity and natural moves
-your feet don't touch the ground in entire so it a bit hard to get/keep a good direction I suppose (But at the frame 850 you make a Very good rotation, I love it )
you got very nice moment where you make Natural/Cool moves but I think(and that count for you both) you don't trust yourself enough. ^^
In general this is a good spar, you got really different/opposite style and this is really appreciable

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#Des
in SP replay..."Hodor!" x)
Last edited by Astral; Apr 29, 2014 at 05:20 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Elle couuurt, Elle coooourt! LA MAAAAaaaAaladiiiie d'amOOoour! Dans le c... (cœur) des enfaaants! De 16 à 77 ans!