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Originally Posted by Kyle View Post
I'm should be the one who received the prize. x_0
But in order to make this occasion more crowded, i'll held an event that judge by me.
Simply, just make an poem with theme 'your best birthday party ever' that consist of min. 1000 words.
Best poem will receive a shutter shades.
I'll announce the result tommorow as soon i receive sufficient poem.
Everyone can participate though.
Don't send your poem to me through PM!
Just post here instead, as long its not deviated the rules of this bord.
I hope this event is confirmed by leader of Metal.

Good luck.

Yeh, why not, you can do it.
But I'm not going to participate in it. I hate poems. ;d
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A poem for Kyle



Sun is shining, wind is blowing,
Birds are singing, river's flowing.
This is a very special day,
hey! it's your birthday,
that's why we celebrate today!


Happy birthday Kyle!
You're a man with style.
Happy birthday, I must say
You’re kind and clever I can say.
You've been with us 19 years,
oh... there goes my tears.
It was so fast,
like you've skipped the past.


Happy birthday!
Blow out the candles and make one wish
and make all your worries vanish.
This party that you'll remember,
will bring happiness to you...forever.


,,Happy birthday'' two more times !
My brain is full of rhymes.
I wish you all the best,
a good life full of happiness
with no sadness and god bless you.
Kyle... happy birthday to you ! :')


This poem was a test for me,
but i made it ... you see.
I am really glad that i did it
It was kinda hard... a bit.
I couldn't make something with over 1000 words
but i've put into this a lot of effort.


So this is it... thank you for reading my poem! :')




Sorry for the delay... i took my time :'P (btw i suck in poems but i tried)
Last edited by Potram; Apr 27, 2014 at 10:31 PM.

Impressive, i guess.
So far i've just got 2 entry.
Still looking for another nice entry.
Deadline is 1 weeks after this post.
If there are none, i'll start to pick a winner.
Oh, we need to write a poem and there is a price for the best one?
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Originally Posted by fantomeex View Post
Oh, we need to write a poem and there is a price for the best one?

yes, exactly

Happy Birthday Kyle
such poem
Happy birthday Kyle
Give him a lot of smile
This is you, shining like a sun
hey, it's a pun!

many bros celebrate it
tons of weed and several tits
unexpected kid and under-age mom
jihad car and exploding bomb
al qaeda
jihad bomber
all loves you kyle !
very jihad
Happy birthday kyle !
our best markeeter
softest silk, finest sapphire
cheap price, high quality
he rolls with high quantity
his mom is proud of him
even his hoes is proud of him
much feels
19 years of rollin' out
never feels making out
he don't need any shit
no present no bullshit
he only needs finest shit
good ol' weed good ol' rolls

I want to ask you thing
something that very dumb
do you like to bump
not ordinary bump , but necro bump
I'm guessing its a no
because you don't like necro
anything that involving the word necro
necrophillia
necrophobia
you're not a philia
neither a phobia

This shit is too hard
I bet you love lard
since 1000 word is too long
because my poem is too strong
strong feeling
either penis
penis (lol)

I wrote this for 30 min
my life sucked into this being
I don't care anymore
I put my effort in it

Last edited by Trocher3; Apr 27, 2014 at 06:16 PM.
:D
Damn. Metal is place for poetics.
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