Originally Posted by
Leonardo
Its better than I can do.
I dont like the punch, you can try to change the punch a little to make a boom hit.
Seems possible, I guess. I'll try ;)
Originally Posted by
pusga
Oh wow you really got terribly rusty.
I think the opener is ok, I don't see anything very wrong or very good with it.
The punch was alright, a bit stiff though.
I like the pose, it was sweet.
I don't like to give ratings to very simple replay, but if I had to, I'd say 6/10 for an average.
Yeah, I went with the opener because it's a generic one. I had no idea what to do. Thanks for the feedback
Originally Posted by pusga
Also posting this replay here because of retarded people posting four word CnC.
Just a simple splitcap.
I like it. I have always been fond of simple replays, it usually shows more grace and actual control of tori. The way you gain momentum is nice and shows you actually know how momentum works. The kick is clean. The only thing about the replay that I didn't like was something you can't really avoid, it's the floaty part right after the kick. I always try to gain some downwards force by hitting slightly upwards to reduce this, but you couldn't really do that here. Overall, nice, clean splitcap.
Also, Leonardo: Nice. Looks promising. I don't think the nose looks too long, it ends just below the glasses. I like the shading, it looks very nice.
Last edited by Meamme0; Mar 12, 2012 at 07:22 AM.