Opener was a bit stiff, but was alright.
The manip was good, and the decap was very well done.
You should have went for the split on that kick instead of what you've done (IMO).
The hits were alright too, could have went for uke's lower part.
Not impressed, but it's much, much better than your last one. 7/10

The opener was really slow and as pusga said, after the decap, the replay gets boring.

However whither was really impressive. The opener just made me go :O
Removing that clash and making a double leg hit would be better imo.

thanks guys

how about this one

The manip would have been very nice if Uke didn't touch the ground.
From all the hits, the last punch stood out the most. The abs kick was okay too, I just didn't like the second one that much.

The opener and flow was pretty good but the flow got really messed up around 550 or something. Really glorious core there, loved how it was non-grab. Torso hit could've been easily a boom. The final punch was an amazing addition to the replay, good job.
What I didn't like was that you never contractad your wrist in the whole replay, it may be your style but I still disliked that.

Thanks.


New replay here, not too shabby, though I forgot how2replay :c

Supa fast opener, love it.
The first kick was great, but the second one had a really strange angle.
Awesome pose too. Pretty straight forward replay.

Well, the manip was really fast.
The first kick was nice and the second kick was better.
yoour movement was great but you were a bit stiff in the mid air though.
awesome pose.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

The opener started well but you made it too long, there was no reason to keep it going like that.
Nicely done decap, and the punch was pretty good too. I liked how you used your grab.
It seems like you were going for a punch but then gave up on it here and went for that punch-grab, which didn't look that great tbh.
The crotch kick was good, but that's about it.