Imo, the start of the replay was sorta weird... I don't think that it should have been started when they were that close to each other. It doesn't give them much time to run.
Most of the replay was stiff, which isn't good. Needs to be more relaxed.
I see that you guys decided to start off with a run but it didn't turn out to be so successful. Like I said before, it was sorta weird.
Near the end, and throughout the replay, there were opportunities in which you guys could have gotten more hits in. Maybe would have made it look cooler.
Also, both people shouldn't be posing at the end. A spar should be ended with a knock-out blow, which leaves the loser on the ground and full relaxed. Mostly because that's how they're going to end up, because they have less points. But other than that the poses looked good.
Also, too much jumps, not a lot of fighting. All the points in the replay were gained in the beginning, which means after the fighting, it's boring and hard to watch.
Also, imo, I think that the replay should've been about 1200 frames, giving the two time to run at each other. In this case isn't really needed, but just a tip for the future.
Note: These are all my opinions, I don't wish to offend the makers of this replay, just to inform of what should be fixed in future spars. Constructive criticism.
Also, I used also too much.
Last edited by Kunamikaii; Oct 14, 2012 at 09:27 AM.