I'ma drag you under the bus
That's right your coming with us
I've been out a few years so I might have some rust
But that does not mean I'm still not dangerous
yeah that's right women avoid you like a pizza crust
and your rhymes are so old their starting to collect dust!
Please don't ask me about the pizza crust...
That's right your coming with us
I've been out a few years so I might have some rust
But that does not mean I'm still not dangerous
yeah that's right women avoid you like a pizza crust
and your rhymes are so old their starting to collect dust!
Please don't ask me about the pizza crust...
Last edited by GoldenRox; Apr 27, 2015 at 07:31 PM.
[14:08] <@ego> uncreative fuck R.I.P TL;DR
[14:08] <GoldenRox> That's me all right \(o_o/)
[14:08] <GoldenRox> That's me all right \(o_o/)
The last line was pretty good, even though I can't take 'pizza crust' out of my mind. Good job I guess... lol
Originally Posted by IIInsanEEE
If you didn't get what I did to that piece then you don't deserve my respect.
Not even trying to rhyme by the way, just giving my thoughts.
IIInsanEEE, you rhymed "all" with "y'all" which is equivalent to rhyming "all" with "you all", not different words really.
And Golden, that limerick wasn't a limerick. You had the wrong number of lines, the wrong rhyme scheme and the wrong number of syllables per line. I really appreciate the effort but in all honesty RoboCop did better than you...
Good morning sweet princess
Zelda I really appreciate your criticism about my rapping skills, this is really something I put hard effort on and I will try to improve to fit your standards, I also appreciate your effort to make me look like an asshole while replying ironically to you in a thread that I clearly don't give a fuck about.
Truth be told
