Bump? Meh. Most peeps are busy but I will bump anyway . . .

I hope you like it (if you need something for it like other eyes, a chin or something else, i can make it)

Heyo! Thanks for your efforts, but this is a big rollin' request here. And I do expect the best o' the best!

Let me tell you what needs work (assuming you are willing to make edits):

#1 The face itself is quite high, and a bit strange. I sincerely hope you did not use the reference that "insert name here" . . . Dengue (there we go) used because his sketch isn't quite right anyway.

#2 The lines are obviously flawed. Try to make them less sketchy and sharp.

#3 The eyes are a bit strange. More so the lashes, which for some reason move inward (?).

You got some work to do bro. Good job on the hair, but I will probably pass on it's current state.

Keep at it!
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inspirational music https://soundcloud.com/sda-hubbard/sapphires-melody

*Looks around*

*Realizes dengue is not doing this*

I'll do it, I'll post wips soon.

*Hides in trashcan*

Here's an idea if you want to do something like this.



*a quick 10 minute sketch*

found better reference, I am trying this today.
Fear! my enemies!
EDIT: sketch done:

Damn it dengue why you return I was so close. I'll keep at it though hopefully dengue will have mercy

1738! EY YAAAH BbumpABY!!! SQUAAAA!!!

want more and dont answer posts? come on!

Bumptastic! And Denguh, I showed a reference and gave you peeps ideas. Just do your best :P