I must say that that's quite a great replay Lumi.
Somehow i enjoy much openers as yours, your body looks like held by an elastic and there's so much momentum to exploit in there,
if i was you i would have increased the ed of a bit to avoid touching uke at
the frame 405 without changing the angle for the manipulation.
Perhaps you should have relaxed a bit the joints right before the actual manipulation
instead of focusing only on the kick though i really like how you managed to rotate uke
at the frame 295 to have his head perfectly perpendicular to the floor afterwards.
The only big flaws i noticed is the transition before the first dm, you haven't used the momentum
that you could have gained with the right leg at the frame 280 and the following part was really
bad looking because of both glutes extended and the body almost compressed.
Can not notice any flow on the following combo, lovely kick and skeet(?),
it would have been really easy not to have a good flaw after the kick but you managed to turn
and throw that shoulder with an impressive speed (looking at your position and the weight of it)
getting also a neat double dismemberment.
However i had to watch the replay twice to notice how you got that final crotchkick,
i really apprecciated the fact that even while doing the skeet you were preparing for the following kick.
I bet you can get a much better pose anyway.
Last edited by Pulse; Dec 30, 2011 at 03:16 AM.