Toribash
Originally Posted by MastrRoshi View Post
Better, pretty sure it still doesn't follow the rule of thirds though.
And again, over-filtered

Theres two filters o.o
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Tried new stuff here it is.
Last edited by Lollipopjo; Aug 24, 2012 at 05:48 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Originally Posted by Lollipopjo View Post
I will retry. Sorry.

No need to apologize, we were all beginners once.

Originally Posted by Lollipopjo View Post

Here is what I got using photoshop.

This one is much too bright. The focal blends into the background too much and you lose it easily in there.

Originally Posted by Lollipopjo View Post
Theres two filters o.o
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Tried new stuff here it is.

Make sure you get the focal to stand out against the background more. This one is a bit too blended in as well.
Originally Posted by Hyde View Post
Focal is too obscured, badly placed. Rule of 3rds until experienced enough to otherwise place focals wherever.

i agree.
don't put the focal point in the center, that's a dead spot for the eyes
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