Okay here, so;
Overall Rating:
If this is your first video in toribash, then you must be proud. A good work with the
keyframes, music synch, collab ,etc.
Individuall Rates and explainings.
Effects were coo'.
Theres is one mistake i spot. At the nearly ending you started to extend the replays, and you wanted to make it more longer. That made it a little uninterest to watch the end, but the between part won the most part of the video.
Intro was a complete nakedness. Topless white background with white words that has black outline. You should have spent more time on it.
Ending was a win. Too bad the picture is old.
Music. Prodigy eh? A water clan that needs a prodigy? Well, the effects saved your music in the video, you could have found something better, but its not that bad.
Overall say:
A usual fashion toribash clan video, good work. Next time spend more work on intro, and find a better music.
8/10
Overall Rating:
If this is your first video in toribash, then you must be proud. A good work with the
keyframes, music synch, collab ,etc.
Individuall Rates and explainings.
Effects were coo'.
Theres is one mistake i spot. At the nearly ending you started to extend the replays, and you wanted to make it more longer. That made it a little uninterest to watch the end, but the between part won the most part of the video.
Intro was a complete nakedness. Topless white background with white words that has black outline. You should have spent more time on it.
Ending was a win. Too bad the picture is old.
Music. Prodigy eh? A water clan that needs a prodigy? Well, the effects saved your music in the video, you could have found something better, but its not that bad.
Overall say:
A usual fashion toribash clan video, good work. Next time spend more work on intro, and find a better music.
8/10
Shit got serious.
Removed axel from clan police until further notice.
Originally Posted by toril
1:55 that replay belongs to pulse, not to that guys.
Good video anyway song was decent, editing too. The quality of the video is realy nice
Some of the transitions were not realy appropriate. Want to see more videos from you in the future ;P
Removed axel from clan police until further notice.
