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What do you think about this one?

Looks ok... i wanna see what you can do with it as you get farther into it

Added ingame pics.
What do you want me to add/remove/change?

more details, have more red in it too please.

Should I lower the mouth?

mouth looks fine, condense the face a little bit maybe and add details to the hair. mayne chamge the expression to a derpy sorta surprised look too. just expieriment