#GrAm-Silence
orkoridingdick
I mean, you are getting better, but there are faults in the replay.
For instance, from frame 485, to 455 - rotating your chest, which changed your bodies direction from the way you were going, just looks dumb. Also, your left knee also ghosted through your right leg for 20 of those frames.
After that you kicked off the floor and then contracted that same knee back a few frames later, which was also strange-looking.
The rest of it is pretty good, nice flow and shit, the flopping arms actually look nice here... however, the position your body is in when decapping uke looks awkward and un-natural.
It's a cool replay, but still a little more to go to be really good.
oh and generic opener.