Originally Posted by
crazymen21
Side: RFS
Character Name:Vladislav Ghukov
Character Age:22
Character Background:born in Moscow,thats all you need to know
Specialization:Tech Specialist
Better?
Are you retarded?
The application said your background is optional.
Where you were born is absolutely insignificant. Just leave the damned background information 'n/a' if you can't think of anything. God, I hope you can manage some actual thought if you're going to be a Spetsnaz.
/rant
I am appreciative that you went for Tech Spec rather than a more aggressive character, it shows that you understand the necessity of support characters and the benefits thereof.
Bojan: That actually sounds pretty cool. The ingame element would be awesome, especially for pros like myself. ;D
Crazy: Your logo isn't bad, but the "C" isn't legible, I mistook it for a lower-cased "R", then an upside down "J", and so forth. The bottom line should be thicker. Also, "MEN" should extend further under "CRAZY", in my opinion. I understand it's abstract, but even abstract art gives some regard to proportionality. Or maybe you could add more of those markings throughout, so it doesn't look as empty. Also, splashes of colour really catch a person's eye and add to the appeal. Perhaps you can use black rather than grey, and accentuate it with bright colors.
FPC:
United States Colonial Marines
Jason Dover
Age: 25
Notable Records: Failed High School, 1 Combat Drop, Record long shot with an M43A2 DMR of 3,294 Meters.
Rank: Private
Skills:
STR: 15
DEX: 25
INT: 15
CHR: 15
PER: 35
Weapon Skills:
Heavy Weapons: 0
Assault Rifles: 10
Pistols: 30
Sniper's Rifles: 60
Machine Guns: 0
Explosives: 0
Abilities:
Line Combat Hand to Hand (Powerful fighting ability, based off of 'Judo')
Marine Tough (You can take damage that would normally incapacitate an average person)
Current Weaponry:
-M43A2 12.7mm Armor Piercing High Explosive Incendiary, Bolt Action, 5 Round Clip, 6-24x Advanced Optics Infrared and Night Vision capable.
-M1911A3 .45 ACP 9 Round Clip
-2 MK9 Claymores 180 Degree blast arc, Lethal up to 10 Meters, Casualty inducing at 19 Meters
-1 KA-BAR Fighting Knife (7" Blade)
Current Armor:
P-C-K (Plastic Ceramic Kevlar) Type IV Armor (40 lbs)
Heavy Duty Ballistic Plastic Helmet (2 lbs)
You awaken out of Cryogenic sleep on the U.S.S. Champion Battleship, all 30 Marine Corps Cryo pods are opening along with yours.
^^ That's where you are.
Last edited by Lawrence1; May 13, 2011 at 10:44 PM.