@madman kicks
The opener was pretty quick.. don't make openers like raising or lowering your arms at the first 10 frames... it looks weird and twitchy.. try to make a relaxed opener in the next replays.. like relaxing your shoulders at the start and stuff..
uke's arm dm was a grab dm which is bad.. grab dms are okay but not good
i like the decap and kicks.. try doing some more kicks dms in future replays
@uke replay
again, snap kick openers are noobish to use in replay making.. don't use them.. try using some spins at the start which always impresses people.. one you get a good flow of spin, try kicking uke several times and the dms might get easier.
again, the grab dm split.
i like the tricking at the end.. it was a bit twitchy when you landed the flip.. the kick at the end was cool.. better you finished it before the frames ran own