Nice replay. Felt like uke was acting like a punching bag in the start but he moved ok. Really good action throughout the replay but you have to work on reactions to hits and similar Had some creative attacks but they were all on the same tori. All in all it's a great work. Looking forward to moar.
tho try using atacks and blocks,dodges on both tori's
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The replay was nice but it looked messy and you lost your speed. Try to make the last hits with the swords.
I really liked how you kicked the sword out of Uke's hand.
The opener was nice but it's a bit generic so work on that.
Nice flow and your movement was great in the spins, and nice cork at the end.
The pose was fine.
Sorry for the crappy cnc, I don't know much about tricking ;P