Originally Posted by
zeroback
Ok, back again.
hurhur
A Grasshoppers prayer was nice, you clearly know how to control your body. You had great body control and speed. You ghosted your joints a bunch of time which is bad on self-spars. Only problem I really had here was that you reversed your direction a lot which ruined your flow.
All was innocent was nice at the beginning yet wasn't as good at the end. the opener and first two kicks were nice, they were really fast and decently powerful. The punch was really messy, you bashed uke's wrist against your head and the punch could've been more powerful. The double skeet was pretty nice as that's not done a lot. The complete reversal of your momentum to get to the glute broke your flow a lot. The flip to the groin separation was alright, but it took too long to get to the actual hit and it was fairly awkward.
Bloody shooting stars was nice. It had those long smooth openers that I really like, but you ruined the potential you had for big boomhits. It was smooth and flowed well, but it just didn't have anything special in it.
For now, no, you have the potential but you need to work on getting more power into your hits. You had the potential in all your replays to get boomhits but you just didn't manage to.
Originally Posted by
keoni109
Ok, to clarify, none of these replays were made a year or two ago. I might have similar replays, but I donʻt have them anymore unfortunately. But these replays were all made within a couple months ago, including million dollar shot. I have used million dollar shot in my previous application, but I have edited the last kick (well, also the only kick) and the pose dramatically to add more flow to the replay.
Hobbs Final was alright. Flowed together decently, and you had nice power. Punch was nice and fast and the boomkick was generally the same. Liked the slow-fast-slow rhythm you had going on.
Million dollar shot had a big boomhit, yet it was seriously messy. Opener was also pretty simple. This replay isn't that great, the dms are great but it's far too messy.
Scissors was alright. Liked the double kick you got, but it should've been extended into something else. Replay seems far too plain and empty, as if there's an empty void in it.
No for now. You've got nice movements and dms, but you need to flesh out your style more.
Originally Posted by
TMinster
Ohay there
I think i improved I don't know.
You need to improve on everything Your replays have no style, they're pretty twitchy and you don't exactly know how to get big hits. All your replays are spam grab kicks at close range. Don't apply again for a long time. Considering your improvement from your previous app one month ago, you have a long road of work before you even come close.
No pls.
Originally Posted by
Tyzy
Pls
Nice replays.
Anthropology was great. Opener was pretty simple, yet I liked the dual hits you got at the beginning. Those made my day. I was expecting a chest boom, yet what you did was far more imaginative. The grab kick wasn't great, but the way you threw ukes arm into the air, skeeted it and then went in for a dm was great and unique.
I liked Dancing in the dark. The backwards setup for the cork was pretty nice. The gainer to cork looked nice, you got a decent amount of air and the spin was controlled. The landing wasn't the best but I still enjoyed the replay on a whole.
Darkness afoot was amazing. You had amazing body control and momentum. The constant movement and spins really made the replay and gave it that sense of amazing flow.
No from me, madmans were not up to my standards, they were unique and well-done. Tricking was too complicated, it had flow and looked nice. No body control or style.
Last edited by Dscigs; Jun 30, 2013 at 10:12 PM.