Crime - The opener was slow, and dropping to the ground really didn't do much for you except get a grab on his torso. Also, when you plant your right arm, (it's very twitchy while it does this btw), it doesn't really seem like it does much to aid your spin. The grab itself is what does the spin. The decap was a decap.
Very simple replay, not that wowd by it :c
Comic - Opener was pretty simple, nothing to complain about it, (except for the slow start, but that's probably me with my speed-bias). I'd like to point out that your left leg is very twitchy when you do your first kick, and when you use it to push yourself towards the split torso. Again, very simple, and a little messy.
Shadow - Ghooosting mang. Don't want to do it. Most of the time people can get away with it if it's not that noticeable, but this one is in the opener, and since per usual it's a little slow, its fully visible. Right leg twitches a lot during the opener as well. (it's also very similar to the one in comic, except you don't drop down as much). The hook is probably the most stylish of these replays, and the replay itself is probably the better one than the three.
Overall, you need to have some more variety with your replays. Maybe some more elaborate madmans, manipulations. It doesn't have to be those specifically, you can do split-caps and decaps if you want to. All that matters is that if it's more clean, smooth, stylish, and elaborate than these.
no, sorry. :c
Very simple replay, not that wowd by it :c
Comic - Opener was pretty simple, nothing to complain about it, (except for the slow start, but that's probably me with my speed-bias). I'd like to point out that your left leg is very twitchy when you do your first kick, and when you use it to push yourself towards the split torso. Again, very simple, and a little messy.
Shadow - Ghooosting mang. Don't want to do it. Most of the time people can get away with it if it's not that noticeable, but this one is in the opener, and since per usual it's a little slow, its fully visible. Right leg twitches a lot during the opener as well. (it's also very similar to the one in comic, except you don't drop down as much). The hook is probably the most stylish of these replays, and the replay itself is probably the better one than the three.
Overall, you need to have some more variety with your replays. Maybe some more elaborate madmans, manipulations. It doesn't have to be those specifically, you can do split-caps and decaps if you want to. All that matters is that if it's more clean, smooth, stylish, and elaborate than these.
no, sorry. :c
