im back at the stage where i just make short replays in a short amount of time

hopefully it's not too bad \o/

head grab was excellent. i think i would have liked a no grab decap after all that playing around but thats the only bad thing i saw

awesome

I don't know how I feel about this one really, kinda dislike the way your knees stay extended throughout the air looks awkward.

decap was nice though, but you should try and see if you can make the kick ghost the head to make it look more powerful.

10/10 pose

thanks dudes, here's a new one!

This one is alright, opener was flowed gud but some of the dm's were really iffy because they weren't hit or anything they just came off.

Your grab sound made me lol

you hit your head and it went red and thats not good but this replay is good
no decap

ring ring ring

That was very nice good replay!

split was kinda funny for some reason, maybe i was expecting a powerful hit lol
the first hit you did that made uke spin a lot was really good, styling all over that shit
i noticed in this and in another manip replay you made you tend to do that thing at 756 with your arm a lot, which is trying to extend the elbow in an attempt to lift uke, when in reality it doesnt actually look like it is helping at all. still, thats something you could easily fix. nice replay

the only thing i didnt like about this was the huge momentum kill in the lift
the rest is awesome dont change