Endurance Onslaught 6.0
I feel there's something wrong about it... Some things that shouldn't be there, and some placement?



Try removing those three orbs I marked, I kind of take'em as noise/disturbance...
And try moving all the particles from the top left, and make them go with the character (Like at his back), it feels wrong up there.

Other than that, it looks really nice ^^

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Originally Posted by Fenris View Post
I feel there's something wrong about it... Some things that shouldn't be there, and some placement?



Try removing those three orbs I marked, I kind of take'em as noise/disturbance...
And try moving all the particles from the top left, and make them go with the character (Like at his back), it feels wrong up there.

Other than that, it looks really nice ^^

I agree on the orb in the bottom right, but the other ones help the atmosphere and create flow.

Originally Posted by Danzos View Post
Wafflz, y u no 1px border!?

Overrated.